Artificial Mustache
Artificial Mustachrle
This story is written by Himanshu a agent of international police of India. This story starts from USA🇺🇸. I got my first mission in which international criminal Dawood Ibrahim. I was on the coffee shop when he came je was searching me at that time their agent was also in police but that time I had wear mustache and a wig then he was not able to identify. Then but mistake one of their agent I police give my information and a photo as well. Then he gave the photo to their group and ask them to find me and get information about me and my family. Then he got the information about me that I am from India 🇮🇳and about my family members, and then he asks them to but their family members here. Then one person from his family tell that at the starting he was just a boxer but after few years he become a sharpshooter,makeup artist and a stuntman as well. Now he is on mission to killed you and we know he will definitely do it, and we will walk to our home safely. Then Himanshu came with his old hairstyle so that they can think but when they remove the makeup, and then he come on a truck, and he hit cars of Abraham so that he could not run. That time Ibrahim's some Gards were killed and the left were killed by the boxing style of Himanshu. Then Abraham was under himanshu, and then he calls the police 👮 and handover to then but before going he punch to him and said I beat everyone but that time you were left, so you can take now. Now everyone is safe and the agents' family is on their home and Himanshu got a new mission, and he was going to China 🇨🇳 this time to find a person who created corona virus
I didn't get somethings because you didn't used punctuation and there are mistakes of some spellings as well. In this, there is not subject verb agreement sometimes. And your story started with past but you used some present sentences also. Overall your idea of this story and content is very amazing. Please edit your mistakes as well.
ReplyDeleteGood try Himanshu, you can do some work on sentence structure and punctuation mark.
ReplyDeleteYou story is very nice you wrote so many things and points as well ,yes you did few mistakes like making sentences and spelling also. Well tried be continue.
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