Seismoman

          Seismoman 

This story start from Neptune. A common person came on earth because he was rejected by the chief of Neptune to be on team to destroy other planet 🌍 and make their empire and rule. Then they put him on earth. Then the hero changed his decision to be in team he decided to protect earth. and the aliens 👽 made a machine that will make an artificial earthquake, the first place is Delhi a populated area. After coming on earth he changed his getup and trying to get a way to protect from the disaster. Then he thinks that when he falls from the spaceship the body was glowing, and he was observing the things, then he tried to absorb, but he was not able to absorb, but then he saw something and then he was chasing them then he falls and the start flying in the air. Then he got an idea to find from up and protect. After few days ⌚ when the aliens came he was hiding for them,then the fight starts and the hero was beating the aliens, 👽 then chief run and activated the machine then the hero came and beat the chief, but now there were no chance to deactivated and time was running out hero didn't get any idea the time was going to finish the hero get angry, and he  shouts very loudly and then he punch then he started absorbing the waves of earthquake by her hand ✋. Then a little girl speak a  name  Seismoman and then everyone start clapping 👏 and praying & thanking God to send a someone to protect. 

Thankyou

Comments

  1. Very nice. Himanshu. Keep it up.
    And please take care :-
    1. that's "observe" not absorb. Ok. And, 2. After a long time. In this, no need of capitalisation of the letter L in (long) .
    3. In team. Not on team.

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  2. Nice fantasy Himanshu, you are doing great work. Please take care about punctuations and other things like comma, full stop.

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  3. Well done Himanshi be continue and take care your mistakes .

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  4. Inciting incident - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
    Rising action - ⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐
    Climax - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
    Resolution - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


    Your story has many climax and rising ideas always. Very nice. Himanshu

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